Paper 1 assessment learner response

 1) Type up your feedback in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to).

WWW: theres the occasional exellent starts and clearly some knowlage of termanoligy but also needs to be a harsh lesson in the knowladge you need for summer exams

EBI:put simply , you write almost nothing for the 12,8 and 6 markers.You need to revise the CSPs (and theory where relevant ) so you can write extended paragraphs in response to these questions. see the mark scheme for ideas

2) Look at the mark scheme for this assessment. For Question 2 (12 mark unseen) use the indicative content in the mark scheme to identify three points that you could have referred to in your answer.

-Athletic body connotes that the subject is in condition and well prepared for the‘battle’.

-The text is positioned over the top of the tyre to signify the challenge and createsynergy between the image and the message in the text.

-The use of the spotlight (through the flood lit logos) links to sports matches andconnotes drama / excitement but also shines on the main image connoting hispower.

3) For Question 3 (Galaxy - narrative features) use the mark scheme to write down the main narrative theories and how we can link them to the Galaxy advert CSP. 

-The structure of the narrative: it follows a linear structure and features versions oficonic actors from the glamorous era of Hollywood (a CGI Audrey Hepburn and alookalike for Gregory Peck) associated with sophistication and desirability.

-There is disequilibrium at the start when the village is associated with chaos (fruitfalling, bus stopping, people shouting). This is juxtaposed with the calm, heroicpersona that the audience encounters when they meet Hepburn and, when the newequilibrium is restored at the end, the sweeping vista suggests endless possibilities /traditional happy ending at the closure of the narrative.

4) Now look at Question 4 - Tatler and social/cultural contexts. Use the mark scheme to identify three points you could have made in your answer here.

-Serif font for title connotes formality, high class and how wellestablished the magazine is (Britain’s oldest magazine).

-‘Blond Ambition’ shows link to Prime Minister Boris Johnson(interview with his brother). Reflects Tatler’s focus on power andinfluence in Britain. This is also seen in cover line ‘Inside the newBritish establishment’.

-References to royalty / aristocracy suggests elite demographic andreflects ingrained aspects of British culture (‘Off Duty RoyalDressing’)

5) On Section B, focus on Question 7 - film industry and Black Widow. Use the mark scheme to identify three ways Black Widow was marketed to its audience.

-Specific IMAX promotions with 22 minutes of the film shot in 1.90:1 aspect ratioespecially for IMAX cinemas.

-Social media profiles on TikTok, Instagram, Twitter and Facebook. Social media andYouTube advertising was also heavily used by Marvel to promote the film includingusing tweets from audience members on massive billboards.

-Marketing Black Widow was a challenge due to the Covid pandemic and it thereforedid not make as much money at the box office as other Marvel films despite thismarketing and promotion.

6) Finally, write down three things you are going to work on before your next mock exam in December (e.g. time management; revising CSPs etc.)

I shall work harder at homne witrh doing my nown task that will hepl the information get stuck in my head.I will do this by watching movies and its promotions and aslso just general yt vids about CSPs